Diction — English definition
Defined in 5 courses:
- An author's specific choice of words. (English 9: Experience, Perspective & Inquiry)
- A writer's specific choice of words. (English 9: Experience, Perspective & Inquiry)
- A writer's deliberate choice of words — the main lever for creating tone. (English 10: Choices, Conscience & Consequences)
- A writer's specific word choice, which shapes tone and steers how an argument feels. (English 11: American Voices, Identity & Public Memory)
- A writer's characteristic choice of words — their level (formal or plain), their precision, and the flavor they carry. (English 12: Complex Texts, Independent Inquiry & Public Voice)
Where it is taught
- Figurative & Connotative Language — Close Reading & Literary Analysis, English 9: Experience, Perspective & Inquiry, Grade 9
- Tone, Diction & Register — Language, Style & Conventions, English 9: Experience, Perspective & Inquiry, Grade 9
- Diction & Tone — Language, Style & Conventions, English 10: Choices, Conscience & Consequences, Grade 10
- Rhetorical Analysis — Public Argument, Rhetoric & Competing Accounts, English 11: American Voices, Identity & Public Memory, Grade 11
- Diction, Tone & Voice — Language, Style & Conventions, English 12: Complex Texts, Independent Inquiry & Public Voice, Grade 12
In use
When a writer picks one word over a near-synonym, that choice of words is called diction, and the reason for the choice is almost always that hidden connotative layer.
Figurative & Connotative Language
Diction is just a precise word for a writer's word choices — and those choices are the main lever for creating tone, the attitude a piece of writing takes toward its subject or its reader.
Tone, Diction & Register
Diction is simply a writer's word choices, but the reason those choices matter so much lies in the gap between denotation and connotation.
Diction & Tone
Questions using diction
Problem 1
Answer and explanation
“The committee reported that volunteers collected 23 bags of litter; it did not test water quality.” The revision replaces vague praise and unsupported proof with a specific, limited statement. A complete response supplies context, a focused claim, a brief supporting detail, explanation, and a relevant qualification. Do not simply repeat this model.
Use the criteria to compare your reasoning, not to copy the model’s wording. A supported alternative interpretation may earn full credit.
Response criteria
- Make an accurate, focused claim or revision.
- Use a relevant detail or a clearly explained language choice.
- Explain the relationship and recognize a relevant limit.
Problem 2
- Sarcastic and unimpressed
- Neutral and purely factual
- Confused and uncertain
- Enthusiastic and glowing
Answer and explanation
Sarcastic and unimpressed
Faint-praise phrases like 'edible,' 'technically happened,' and 'generously be called' create a sarcastic, unimpressed tone rather than genuine praise or neutrality.
Problem 3
Answer and explanation
“The committee reported that volunteers collected 23 bags of litter; it did not test water quality.” The revision replaces vague praise and unsupported proof with a specific, limited statement. A complete response supplies context, a focused claim, a brief supporting detail, explanation, and a relevant qualification. Do not simply repeat this model.
Use the criteria to compare your reasoning, not to copy the model’s wording. A supported alternative interpretation may earn full credit.
Response criteria
- Make an accurate, focused claim or revision.
- Use a relevant detail or a clearly explained language choice.
- Explain the relationship and recognize a relevant limit.
Problem 4
Answer and explanation
Answers vary; the revision should replace the abstractions with concrete, sensory specifics, for example: 'Half the storefronts on Main Street were papered over, the laundromat's sign hung by one bolt, and a foreclosure notice curled on the door of the corner grocery.' Concrete images like the papered storefronts and the foreclosure notice let the reader see the decline instead of being told about it in the abstract.
Taught alongside
- connotation
- denotation
- figurative language
- tone
- register
- colloquial
- ethos
- pathos
- logos
- kairos
- denotation vs. connotation
- voice