Mood shift — English definition
An inconsistent, incorrect switch from one verb mood to another within the same sentence or passage.
Where it is taught
- Verb Moods — Language, Style & Conventions, English 8: Trust, Community & Responsibility, Grade 8
In use
Finally, watch out for a mood shift — an awkward, inconsistent jump from one mood to another mid-thought.
Verb Moods
Questions using mood shift
Problem 1
Which sentence contains an inappropriate mood shift?
- Close the door, and you should also turn off the lights.
- Close the door, and turn off the lights.
- Please close the door and turn off the lights.
- Would you close the door and turn off the lights?
Answer and explanation
Close the door, and you should also turn off the lights.
The first sentence starts with an imperative command ('Close the door') then awkwardly shifts to an indicative suggestion ('you should'), creating an inconsistent mood shift.
Problem 2
Which sentence fixes the mood shift in: 'Turn off the lights, and you also should recycle your can.'?
- Turn off the lights, and recycle your can.
- You turn off the lights, and you also should recycle your can.
- Turning off the lights, you also should recycle your can.
- If you turn off the lights, you also should recycle your can.
Answer and explanation
Turn off the lights, and recycle your can.
Keeping both actions in the imperative mood ('Turn off... and recycle...') fixes the inconsistent shift.