Show, don't tell — English definition

A technique where a writer reveals a feeling through action and detail instead of simply naming the emotion.

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In use

The technique that ties everything together is show, don't tell.

Narrative Writing

Questions using show, don't tell

Problem 1

Which sentence best demonstrates 'show, don't tell'?
  1. Jordan's pencil tapped the desk faster and faster until the girl beside him shot him a look.
  2. Jordan was having a nervous kind of day.
  3. Jordan was really nervous about the test.
  4. Jordan felt a nervous feeling inside.
Answer and explanation

Jordan's pencil tapped the desk faster and faster until the girl beside him shot him a look.

This sentence reveals nervousness through a specific action and reaction rather than simply naming the emotion.

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